for instant buzz in your humdrum pitch, just add quotation marks!
someone said it, right?
This "just" in from Dan Roth, buzz assassin:
Hi, Dan:
As I mentioned in my voicemail message, I'm working with two
hot tech companies right now -- both of which will be "coming
to a city near you..."
I hope you are interested in meeting with Steve -- He would
be happy to share with you RandomCompany's "secrets"
-- and why companies are choosing RandomCompany Software's
services over their, perhaps, bigger named competitors.
I look forward to hearing from you!
Cheers,
M______ B____